Koba's Profile—Autumn 2021

Alliston Humane Society
Copywriting: Rachel Ramkaran

Koba is a large, strong adult dog who was having trouble getting adopted. His original profile over-emphasized his strength and training needs, making him sound intimidating. I rewrote the copy to soften it and highlight the endearing characteristics of this lovely dog. 

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*Note: line break errors have occurred on client's back-end system.